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Week 09 Β· Tracing Arguments

Wednesday

Writing Lab: relevant and irrelevant evidence
// Claim, reasons, evidence, and whether they hold
⏱ about 20 min

Wednesday: Writing Lab, Relevant and Irrelevant Evidence

Rocket slaps a letter on the table. "This one has evidence everywhere. Nine boards, two soft boards, two cans of paint. Heavy!"

Raven reads it slowly. She stops at one line and taps it. "Read this one."

"My cousin's fence is bright blue and looks wonderful." Rocket shrugs. "True, probably."

"What do you notice about what it proves?"

Rocket thinks. "Nothing about our fence. It is about a different fence."

"True, but not relevant," Raven says. "It goes in the cup, but it should not count."

Nova hovers above the balance, her light on the blue-fence card. "Weight is not the only test," she says. "Ask what the card is tied to."

Learn it: relevant evidence

Evidence is relevant when it is connected to the claim it is meant to support. Irrelevant evidence may be true, but it proves nothing about the claim.

Writers sometimes slip irrelevant evidence in because it sounds good. A careful reader notices and sets it aside.

Raven thinks aloud: "The text says nine boards show bare wood. That is tied to the claim that the fence needs paint. The cousin's blue fence is tied to nothing in this garden."

Test each piece of evidence: If this is true, does it make the claim more likely? If not, it is irrelevant.

  • Find the claim. Keep it in your head.
  • For each piece of evidence, ask: Does this make the claim more likely to be true?
  • Set aside anything that answers no, even if it is interesting.

Read it

This letter ran in this week's Signal. Two of its sentences are true but irrelevant.

Read it
Letter to The Signal: Paint the Garden Fence
The fence around the community garden should be painted this autumn, before the frost.
The paint is peeling. On the side facing the path, I counted nine boards with bare wood showing.
Bare wood soaks up rain. Two boards near the gate have gone soft, and one wobbles when the gate swings.
The garden sign-up sheet asks members to care for the garden all year, and the fence is part of the garden.
My cousin's fence is bright blue and looks wonderful.
The skate ramp has a yellow line, and everyone likes it.
Twenty gardeners have plots this year. If each one paints one board, the job takes a single Saturday.
The shed by the garden already holds two cans of fence paint left over from the gate.
Painting before the frost protects the wood through winter, so the fence will stand for another year.
Signed, a gardener on plot seven
CHECK IT: PAINT THE GARDEN FENCE
  • Read the question.
  • Tap your answer.
What is the claim?
Which piece of evidence is relevant to the claim?
Which sentence is true but irrelevant?
Which evidence supports the idea that the job is doable?
Relevant or irrelevant?True or false?
"Two boards near the gate have gone soft" is relevant.?
"My cousin's fence is bright blue" is relevant.?
"The shed holds two cans of fence paint" is relevant.?
Irrelevant evidence must be false.?
WHY THIS EXERCISEIrrelevant evidence can be perfectly true. The test is whether it is tied to the claim.
How many boards showed bare wood? Type the number.
How many cans of paint are in the shed? Type the number.
Which word in the first line tells when the painting should happen? Type the season.
TEST A PIECE OF EVIDENCE
  • Which step comes first when testing evidence?
  • Tap the cards in order.
1First
2Next
3Then
4Last
Try it
Copy the two irrelevant sentences onto cards and set them beside your notebook.
Read the letter without them. Notice whether the argument got weaker or stronger.

Write it: Writing Lab

Today you trace this argument in a paragraph. Use the checklist before you stop.

Checklist
My first sentence states the claim of the letter in my own words.
I named at least two reasons and the evidence under each.
I named the two irrelevant sentences and said why they do not count.
My last sentence says whether the claim is supported, using the text.

True is not the same as relevant. Tomorrow you test whether the reasoning holds and whether the evidence is enough.

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