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Week 12 · Revise, Edit and Press Day

Press Day

Press Day: The Final Issue
// Make it clearer for the reader, make it correct, and print the final issue
⏱ about 20 min

Press Day: The Final Issue

The string lights come on at dusk, and the porch steps fill with neighbors. The final issue of the fall is thicker than any before it.

"Three pieces each," Rocket says, handing out booklets. "A story, an explainer, an argument. All revised. All edited."

"All proofread," Raven adds. "Twice."

A neighbor opens one on the steps and reads the letter from the Signal Desk aloud to a friend.

"What do you notice?" Raven whispers.

"Nobody is tripping," Rocket whispers back. "They just keep reading."

Nova hovers above the lights, her glow mixing with theirs. "That is what editing is for," she says. "Nobody notices it. Everybody feels it."

Scout, on his leash, sits on the last copy. Nobody minds. It is a good night to be read.

  1. Revising changes what a piece says and how it is arranged for its purpose and audience.
  2. The four moves of revision are add, remove, move and reword.
  3. Editing fixes conventions: capitals, commas, quotation marks, apostrophes, colons and spelling.
  4. Trying a new approach is a choice, not a failure. Write an opening three ways and pick the one that promises the ending.
  5. A reader gives one compliment and one question. Write both down.
  6. Proofreading is the last slow read, for mistakes only. Revise first, then edit, then proofread.
◇ HAND OUT THE FINAL ISSUE
Read your letter from the desk aloud to someone at home, then read your favorite of your three pieces.
Ask your listener for one compliment and one question. Write both in your Signal notebook.
Swap: ask them to read one of your pieces back to you. Listen for any place they trip, and mark it.
If you have a few folded booklets, give one to each person who listened.
PRESS DAY CHECK
  • Read the question.
  • Tap your answer.
Which is a revision move?
What is proofreading?
Why did Rocket say nobody was tripping?
Final issue reviewTrue or false?
Editing comes before revising.?
A good opening makes a promise the ending keeps.?
A reader's question shows where the reader got lost.?
"Its" with no apostrophe means it is.?
WHY THIS EXERCISETwelve weeks of reading and writing come down to this: know your reader, say it clearly, and make it correct.

Twelve weeks at the Signal Desk

You began by finding evidence in a text. You traced themes, plots, word choices and points of view. You read arguments and wrote one.

Then you compared a poem to a story, and this week you revised and edited your own work for a real reader. That is the whole job of a writer, done once.

Try it
Fold three sheets into a booklet. Copy your letter from the desk onto page one and your three headlines onto page two.
Hand it to someone and watch which piece they turn to first.

The final issue is out. You read closely, found evidence, compared texts, and wrote a story, an explainer and an argument. Keep the Signal notebook going.

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