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Week 08 · Explanatory Writing

Press Day

Press Day: the explainer goes out
// Explain something clearly, section by section
⏱ about 20 min

Press Day: The Explainer Goes Out

Saturday morning, the folded issues stand in neat stacks on the long table. Rocket adds one more page to each.

"The ramp explainer," he says. "Topic sentence, three sections, conclusion. Every fact from the notes."

Raven reads the last copy before it goes in the basket. "What do you notice about how it sounds now?"

"Like it was built," Rocket says. "Not dropped."

Nova hovers by the steps, her light on the basket. "A reader who never saw the ramp could picture it now," she says. "That is what explaining is."

The crew carries the basket to the top step. A neighbor with a scooter takes the first copy.

  1. An explanatory text teaches a reader about a topic with facts, not opinions.
  2. The topic sentence names the topic and hints at the plan.
  3. Facts are grouped into sections, each with a heading and at least two details from the given text.
  4. Transitions such as also, for example, however and finally link one idea to the next.
  5. The conclusion gathers the sections and tells the reader why the topic matters.
◇ READ YOUR EXPLAINER ALOUD
Read your ramp explainer to a family member or friend.
Ask them to tell you one thing they learned about the ramp.
Ask for one compliment and one question. Write both in your Signal notebook.
Then swap: listen to them explain something they know well, and give one compliment and one question back.
PRESS DAY CHECK
  • Read the question.
  • Tap your answer.
Your listener asks a question your explainer did not answer. What is the best next step?
Which sentence belongs in a conclusion?
Which is a transition that adds a fact?
Press Day checkTrue or false?
A good explainer lets a reader who never saw the ramp picture it.?
Opinions make an explainer stronger.?
Reading your draft aloud helps you hear missing transitions.?
WHY THIS EXERCISEExplaining is building a clear picture from facts a reader can trust.
How many sections does your ramp explainer have between the topic sentence and the conclusion? Type the number.
WHY THIS EXERCISEThree sections, each with a heading, is the plan the whole week was built on.
Checklist
My explainer has a topic sentence, three sections with headings, and a conclusion.
Every fact can be pointed to in Raven's notes.
I used at least three transitions and no opinion words.
I read it aloud and fixed what I heard.

Your explainer is in the issue. Next week you read letters that argue, and learn to trace a claim to its evidence.

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