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Week 01 Β· Evidence Hunters

Monday

Right there in the text
// Say what you see, then say what it means
⏱ about 20 min

Monday: Right There in the Text

Rocket drops a folder on the Signal Desk. "The corkboard changed overnight. Someone moved every card."

Raven looks up from her notebook. "Someone? Or something? What do you notice about the string?"

Rocket squints. The red string that joins the cards now sags toward the porch floor.

"It sags," he says. "So the cards slid down. Nobody moved them. The pins slipped in the damp."

Nova hovers over the board, her light tracing the string. "You just did two things," she says. "You said what you saw. Then you said what it means."

"Evidence first," Raven says, writing it down. "Then the claim. This week The Signal runs on proof."

Rocket grins. "Evidence Hunters. That is the headline."

Rocket, Raven and Nova at the Signal Desk with sticky notes beside story lines and a magnifying glass.

Learn it: evidence is what the text says

Evidence is the words of the text itself. When you make a point about a passage, you cite evidence: you point to the exact line.

Some evidence is explicit. The text states it in plain words, and you can put your finger on it.

Raven thinks aloud: "The text says the string sags toward the floor. So I know the cards slid down. That line is my evidence."

A point without a line is only an opinion. A point with a line is a case.

  • Read the question and find its key word.
  • Scan the passage for that word or a word close to it.
  • Put your finger on the line that answers the question.
  • Quote the words, then say what they show.

Read it

Read it
The Corkboard Case
On Tuesday morning, Raven arrived at the Signal Desk before anyone else.
The porch was quiet, and the reading lamp was still off.
She noticed the corkboard first. Every pinned card had slipped at least a finger's width lower than the day before.
The red string that joined the cards drooped in loose curves.
Raven did not touch anything. She opened her notebook and wrote what she saw.
"Cards lower. String loose. Pins still in the board, but tilted."
When Rocket arrived, he announced a mystery before he had set down his bag.
"Someone rearranged our cards," he said. "A prank."
Raven pointed at the pins. "Look at the angle. They all lean the same way, down and left."
Rocket leaned in. "If a person moved the cards, the pins would point every which way."
"Right," said Raven. "And the porch was damp last night. The pins in that old board slip whenever it gets damp."
Nova drifted closer, her light making the string glow. "What else is lower?" she asked.
Rocket looked around the porch. The Press Day sign on the post had slid down its nail too.
The jar of pencils had tipped against the lamp. The folded issues had slumped in their stack.
"Everything slipped," he said slowly. "Nobody touched it. The weather did."
Raven wrote one more line: "Case closed by evidence." Then she pushed every pin back in firmly.
Rocket pinned a new card to the top of the board. It read: "Say what you see. Then say what it means."
CHECK IT: THE CORKBOARD CASE
  • Read the question.
  • Tap your answer.
What did Raven notice first?
Which way did all the pins lean?
Which line is explicit evidence that the weather caused the slip?
What did the new card at the top of the board say?
StatementTrue or false?
Raven touched the cards before writing anything down.?
The Press Day sign had also slipped down its nail.?
Rocket first thought the cards were moved as a prank.?
The pins had fallen out of the board.?
WHY THIS EXERCISERaven wrote first and touched nothing. The pins were still in the board, only tilted.
Which one word in the passage names what the pins do when the board gets damp? Type the word.
WHY THIS EXERCISEThe text says the pins in that old board slip whenever it gets damp. The passage itself explains the loose pins.
CITE IT: WHICH LINE PROVES IT?
  • Read the question.
  • Tap your answer.
Point: Raven is careful. Which line proves it?
Point: the slip happened to more than the cards. Which line proves it?
Point: Rocket changed his mind. Which line proves it?
PUT THE CORKBOARD CASE IN ORDER
  • What happened first?
  • Tap the cards in order.
1First
2Next
3Then
4Last
Try it
Read The Corkboard Case aloud once more.
Each time a line states something a person could see, tap the table once.
Count your taps. Those lines are the explicit evidence in the passage.

Strong start, Evidence Hunter. Tomorrow the text will not say everything outright, and you will read between the lines.